I wrote another synopsis of my book - as I found the last one too generic. Your opinion matters so tell me what you think - please leave a comment.Michael D'Cunha is called in to investigate a fire incident in the middle of the night at Mumbai's posh Worli Seaface apartment where the owner has died. He is convinced it is arson, not an accident - either for insurances or an adulterous relationship gone sour. But the only beneficiary is out of the country and the suspected other woman has more alibis than he can count. No one else seems to have any motive to finish the guy...
Who said joining the dots was ever easy?
6 comments:
This seems Professional now.
Vikramjeet.
this makes more sense -I have to admit, I hadn't quite understood what was the previous one about.
theodora
Good stuff. Nice write up, the squirrel looks smart.Is this going to be the cover of the book?
Yes - straight talk, works ...Rats
Good job Vish. It is a good invitation to read the book. I Vish you a great success with it. Francisco (Spain)
Vish, I like it apart from the last para, it seems to close down the thread rather than invite you to read further - either remove altogether or start with it? The "join the dots" line is a much better finish. I would also try to get a line in about the detective's personality, that will draw the reader in more too. Best - R
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